《劍橋雅思真題16》非數據小作文居多，尤其流程圖占倆，盡管今年的實戰考試中流程圖占比并不多，但大家依舊不能松懈。流程圖得分的分水嶺主要在于銜接手段，大多數考生面臨的問題在于銜接過于單一機械，導致銜接分數堪憂。因此下面范文的不同銜接手段值得揣摩。趕快跟隨新航道雅思培訓班小編一起來看看吧~

  《劍16》Test 2 小作文題目

  審題

  常規的制造類流程圖，圖不難看懂，注意所有信息包含(TA)，銜接手段(CC)，動詞使用靈動(LR)，以及語法層面不能都是簡單句(GRA)。

  Rephrasing

  The flow chart is an illustration of how sugar is manufactured from sugar cane.

  主句部分可以從句型上進行改寫，將主謂賓改為主系表結構，of后面則是how引導的從句。

  Body 1

  To produce cane sugar, one raw material – <同位語的插入現象> ripe sugar canes – is the necessity. <先后順序可以利用時態來體現> Having matured for one year to a year and a half, the canes are reaped <注意兩個箭頭，可使用平行結構> either by a giant harvester or by farmers with sickles. <表語從句> The subsequent step is that the <頂針：前一個的動詞可以轉成同根詞不同詞性變體，加強步驟間銜接緊湊> harvested canes are squeezed into juice by a rolling crusher. Till now, all the preparatory procedures are accomplished.

  利用時態、句式、同根詞變體等方式，進行銜接，而非機械使用firstly, secondly, then等。

  Body 2

  After preparation, <倒裝句> here comes the next step of pouring the raw juice into a filter made of limestone to have the juice refined. <方位詞引導的完全倒裝句> At the bottom of this filter is an exit, through which the <同根詞不同詞性變體> filtered fluid is instilled in a heated stove, in which it is turned into thick syrup by evaporating the moisture. Afterwards, the hot syrup is placed in a spinning centrifuge for the purpose of detaching the sugar crystals from the liquid. The process ends with dehydrating and chilling the sugar solids in a container.

  Lexis: 重點關注標紅動詞與圖中動詞的同義替換。

  Overview

  Overall, the method whereby cane sugar is produced is time-consuming, consisting of four main procedures – cultivating, pressing, separating, and drying, and the equipment used is rather primitive.

  TA：考官對于overview的要求，在近幾年一直反復強調需要more detailed，因此步驟需稍微細化。

  GRA：whereby后面是關系副詞引導的定語從句，等同于through which。